Muhammad Nuri Bin Mohammed Noor
B/539 Ang Mo Kio Ave 10 #04-2575
Singapore 560539
B/539 Ang Mo Kio Ave 10 #04-2575
Singapore 560539
9th February 2011
Human Resource
Edgilis Pte. Ltd
3 Fusionopolis Way, Symbiosis #05-20
Singapore 138633
Edgilis Pte. Ltd
3 Fusionopolis Way, Symbiosis #05-20
Singapore 138633
Dear Mr/Ms,
Internship Position
I am applying for the Internship position with Edgilis in the Consulting Division of Innovation Market in Singapore. I was first introduced to Edgilis during the NUS Career Fair that was held on 27th January 2011. Meeting staff at the career fair, such as Mr Selvem, a lead consultant in Edgilis, has fuelled my desire to join one of the growing SME companies in the region.
Having been shortlisted for the Emerging Enterprise 2010 award, Edgilis has a huge potential to be a successful and thriving company that uses a purposeful management style with a healthy business mix to help customers achieve sustainable results. I admire Edgilis’s values of envision, enable and execute that breeds excellence throughout the ranks.
I am currently in the penultimate year of my undergraduate degree at the National University of Singapore (NUS). Upon completion, I wish to pursue my interests in rail transportation by gaining an insight into how system assurance, EMC and innovation play a key role in Asia’s leading opportunity consulting firm. My drive for success compels me to improve in a competitive environment where my potential can be realised.
I have shown initiative and analytical problem solving skills throughout my university education in various projects, such as leading a team of five in an industrial design project at ST Electronics in designing a door drive mechanism. I have demonstrated great communication skills in a plethora of roles while serving NS in the Singapore Police Force such as attending to complainant’s distress in counter service. These skills are also exhibited as a Mendaki tutor, where I manage and motivate a class of 15 students in Admiralty Secondary School.
International exposure such as my overseas community involvement project in Cambodia to build a library for an orphanage school demonstrates my independence and versatility in adapting to a different environment out of my comfort zone.
I believe my desire to succeed; proven leadership and communication skills coupled with my aspiration to work with and motivate others will prove successful in this internship. I would be honoured and inspired to be a part of your on-going success and expansion. I would like to thank you and will be looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Muhammad Nuri.
Impressive application letter! I will not hesitate to call you up for an interview after reading your many skills. From your letter, I now understand what it means by giving examples to substantiate the things your have learnt.
ReplyDeleteSmooth read... Goodluck on your application!
Hey Nuri,
ReplyDeleteI think this was really well done! Good job. I guess this will be no problem for you to get the internship position. Your strong points across have firmly secured the reader's interest.
Cheers,
Watson